On the run! Chapter 1

Bandana check, gun check, ready to go. Trevor raced in his spotless, shiny car towards downtown- not paying attention to what was going on around him. Gosh, that was a close call, that new car isn’t going to be new for much longer. Screech… the wheels cried in agony. Soon later, a kind of old man came out of the car. Ding dong, the bell on the door in the market whistled, then out of nowhere Trevor pulled out a gun. Pointing at the shop keeper people screamed in horror. The worker rummaged through the cash machine still searching for money to give to the theif. “That’s all I have!” shouted the unknown man “Please don’t hurt me!”  Once again the bell sang as Trevor left. He zoomed out in the distance with his engine still roaring .
Suddenly he arrived at a house. He sat on the sofa and watched TV. ” A robbery at Grounded street, the local market.” announced a news reporter.  Trevor’s mouth was wide open- eyes glued to the television. Nothing could stop him concentrating on what he heard on the TV. Nothing could make it worse, only one thing could- knock knock knock.  “Mr Williams are you there? “ someone questioned. “Open the door now or we will force it down!” the voice shouted again. Nothing happened. Bang- the door burst, wide open. Trevor was hiding behind the dusty old couch.  Endless footsteps approached, they became louder and louder. “Hands in the air!”

One thought on “On the run! Chapter 1

  1. jruddy

    Hi Gaby,
    A great opening chapter. You have really hooked me with this. I have loads of questions. Why did Trevor steal? And who has found him? Is it the police? Or is someone else after him? I can’t wait for chapter 2 for some answers.
    Keep up the great work.
    Mr. Ruddy


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