My chrismas story

There was a girl called Jess who was very greedy. At christmas time all that was on her mind was presents. Jess had no friends because of how she was. She was an isolated island. Jess had to change, but she had to make the right decision. It was all up to her.

It was fourteen days till christmas and Jess was demanding presents. Every single child in the neighbourhood knew her as a selfish, horrible child. Santa had even stopped giving her presents. Jess didn’t know what the true meaning of christmas was. She was a Grinch. Eventually her parents became worried becaus she had no friends, so that meant she was lonely. Deep in Jess’s heart she would want a friend but she didn’t know how to act kind because she was too greedy.

It was now twelve days till christmas and Jess became eve more greedier.  Taking things that didn’t belong to her, demanding more presents and becoming more unkind. Jess’s behaviour peppered her mother’s heart. Saddened,disappointed,confused,her mum was because of the way she was behaving. Shouting enragely, Jess was instructing her parents to get more presents for her. Her mother’s heart shattered into tiny fragments. All the hope that Jess would change had disappeared. The flicking candle of hope and been put out. After a while her behaviour had got ot of hands, so her parents just gave up.

When you feel an angelic presence; when you feel a good spirit around you; when you see a bright light, then you know and angel is around. While jess was sleeping an beautiful,elegant angel visited her. Talking softly, the angel called Jess. She woke up from her slumber,frightened .”Do not be afraid i have been sent from God to come and give you a      message”. As the angel said this she was very nervious because of what he was going to say.”I have been sent to tell that your behaviour is not good and you need to realise the real meaning of christmas, sothe trapped souls in your house can be free and rest in peace”. Shaking uncontrollably, Jess agreed to do as he said. (But she knew in her heart that she would not change)

It was three days till christmas and Jess hadn’t changed. She still thougth christmas was all about presents . Jess’s behaviour became even more bad. She was boisterous. Jess was very truculent. Jess hadn’t changed one bit, but one thing changed her. When Jess and her mother went to do  christmas shopping She saw a spectacular model of the nativity. As she looked at baby Jesus her heart changed. I was like how chameleons change colour. Her heart was a emotionless stone, but at that moment it changed into a radient sun.

Christmas came and it was up to Jess to set the trapped souls in her house free. She decided to sit around the christmas tree and think of what the true meaningof chistms was . At that moment there was a earthquake in her house. It wasn’t a natural earthquake. It hapened because that was when the trapped souls were set free. One by one each soul came out  of wherever they were trapped and rose up into the clear  sky. Jess had finally realised what the true meaning of christmas was. She even deicded to give away all the presents she got for christmas to the poor and sick.

Later that day the angel decided to visit Jess again. It had came to tell her that santa was really pleased with what she had done, so the angel gave her the present from santa. It was a present of happiness and laughter. I would make her more happy and kind, so she would know how to act kind to others. The angel also gave her a present. It was a magical badge of bravery and kindness. She earned that because of realising the meaning of christmas and setting the trapped souls free. From that day on she has not been greedy. Not even once. Jess became more kinder and less selfish, so she got many friends. Since that day on her family had become  more and more happier. Her mother got the job of a banker and her father became a judge. Jess became the best behaved girl in the WORLD!!!!!!!!


One thought on “My chrismas story

  1. 15beverley

    Hi Naffrey,
    What a story!!! I liked your use of vocabulary- boisterous, truculent and isolated. I also liked your 3_ed sentence. Your only errors were your words. You missed a few letters in your words but your story was absoloutley fantastic.


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