100WC #Week13

When you see the golden brown, chestnut leaves; when you hear the children jumping with joy into the pile of crackling leaves; when you receive the warm, breathtaking hot chocolate, then you know autumn is near. Seeing the deep crimson leaves made me feel like a baby bird in its nest protected by its mother. I heard a rustle in the leaves. I walked on, as the leaves rustled, I shook uncontrollably making me sweat like a beast. I walked on trying to ignore it, but it felt like a lion was scratching me. Guess what was there, a cat!

2 thoughts on “100WC #Week13

  1. 15sinead

    Good evening Jauvane,
    I loved your when; when; when, then. When you see the golden brown, chestnut leaves; when you hear the children jumping with joy into the pile of crackling leaves; when you receive the warm, breath-taking hot chocolate, then you know autumn is near. I liked when you put Wow words in your when sentences. One of the things I liked when you put golden brown, chestnut leaves, you made the reader think and imagine how it looked like. Overall brilliant and carry on with the great work.

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