100WC week#11

It was the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month. There are still two minutes left of complete silence and the last post is nearly finished. All of a sudden a poppy had fallen. Then another fell, then they all fell. Next I heared an evil cackle. From each poppy a ghost had emerged to live once more. The weapons they died with risen to be handled by ghosts. Bang!!! The ghosts began shooting people to the end of their lives. Inches behind me people were dropping like flies. Scared, worried, terrified I thought to myself will I escape alive?

One thought on “100WC week#11

  1. Carole (Team 100) UK

    Well Ryan this is a very unusual use of the prompt this week. I’m not sure I like the idea of a remembrance day service being taken over by ghosts but that’s just my opinion. I liked your opening sentence and I can see you have been using one of the ‘ed’ sentence types at the end and these are both effective. Look out for verb tenses as they should all be in the past tense and some of them aren’t.

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