100wc

This is a real life story of how my day went on Saturday evening. AMAZING!!! Well, until a boy called Patrick did something unforgettable. It started off fine, my friend came, called Mehmet, and we went outside to play football. It was great fun! We met my other friend, Kinga, and we asked her to join us. She had to go home soon after we started. Mehmet and I strolled back home. Finally at home. OH MY GOODNESS!!! I cried as the boy called Patrick hesitated, but soon carried on. I COULD NOT BELIEVE THE SMELL!!! It was unbelievably horrible.

2 thoughts on “100wc

  1. John Chiswell

    Thank you for your 100WC story – I liked the opening sentence as it created an interesting beginning for the reader.
    I would like to have some more information for the ending
    Keep up your writing
    John C
    Australia – Victoria

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